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Topic: The Greatest Show 2

I've been working on this for some time now.

Since the first story or series of stories was already meant to be interactive and open for contributions, I decided to try something new with the sequel and make it an "Choose your own Adventure" style story.

Here is the beginning: http://www.bearchive.com/~addventure/ga … 8818.html?

So far there are four episodes in total. Anybody can contribute.

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I'm reading the third page now, and must say that it's a very worthy successor to the first part! i like Anabelles transformation, despite the change into a male creature. The description of TF is interesting and well written.

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A good beginning. Maybe others will make a contribution as well now when there are readers from at least two different websites.

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There is a new chapter, written by Brande. smile

BTW: I am in the mood to write another performance but cannot find the right TF. Maybe a conjoinment of mother and daughter without each knowing whats gonna happen before the conjoinment (both are invited separately and made to enter boxes without seeing each other and then fused maybe, only realizing that they got conjoined afterwards). But even then I got no idea for their form.

Suggestions for this TF or other performances are welcome.

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well, i would suggest they look out of the boxes on different sides and fusing at the butt. as the conjoinment progresses the head of one of them is pulled into the box, out of view, while the other one staysvisible but relativlely unchanged, but looses much of his intelligence. (relatively unchanged doesn't mean unchanged at all. a huge penis that's replaceing the nose and mouth combined with a strong sexdrive maybe) The part that is pulled in stays aware and intelligent, but can't really move anymore. maybe she can still communicate like that hanging moderator?

it's  not a complete description, but maybe a start .)

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I did some reading and I'm now more aware of the branching concept of the page.

If an unaware mother and daughter is next, they could be kept in ignorance if some of their mutual friends told them they had a surprise for them. Their (pervert) friends talks them into being blindfolded, put on a nose pinch and music in their ears from an ipod. Before that happens, they are given instructions about what to do when they arrives and just let them lead them. Only when they have gotten them in the right position and the fusing has started do they remove the blindfolds and ipads. I don't know the reason why their friends are doing this, but maybe both the mother and daughter are transformation fans without knowing about their common interests. As for their forms, perhaps your own artwork could be of inspiration, such as the sexual crab or Nemara and Juno.

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well done, brande!

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Thanks, but giving it a second thought, maybe just a bag over the head would work better than a blindfold and nose pinch.

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Made an addition http://www.bearchive.com/~addventure/ga … 6863.html?

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Cool one, I hope to see more!

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A bit mild but I like it.

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It'd fit under the 'odd' category you have on your site, for sure.  Only downside I can see to that transformation is having to smell your poops and farts up close, seeing as the anus didn't migrate with the rest of the genitals.  I foresee them avoiding crowded elevators.  wink

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Ha, I like how that gets classified as 'mild'. 

As for the face/butt thing... yeah, hadn't thought about that.  Guess they'll just have to hold their noses or something big_smile

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This is great stuff, even the "mild" chapters. I love it.

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I've also added a chapter.  http://www.bearchive.com/~addventure/ga … 03590.html
Hope you guys like it!