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Topic: Changing the World Interactive Story

Alright this one is up for chatting about my story, as the forum for stories tends to more post the stories in question. It seems neater to avoid cluttering it up.

Changing the World

Just in case you don't know, I wrote the Inform 7 game, The Capture of Diana. As this thread is titled, I have put up an interactive story on Writing.com.

In my story so far, there's a thread following Allison as she gives herself a horse-cock and causes people choosing to merge with other people and things to be a reality, winding up with a girl merged with her own balls.

I'm currently working on another branch, although I'm not planning on taking it to anything particularly notable, just developing something I hope other people will want to jump off with.

Any feedback on my actual writing is welcome. Feel free to make suggestions or requests for things to happen. Who knows, maybe you'll give me something I really want to write.

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Tsceri here is adding some wonderful chapters to the story. Thank you so much.

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There we go. I've added a string of new chapters to the story.

John, a man who's lost it all.

This pushes the chapter count up to 48, so 20 some odd new chapters. I didn't write almost any truly kinky and strange scenes, I left a lot of places for other people to jump off with their own work.

I think I'll be doing more writing like this. Hopefully it'll catch the attention of some of the writers on the site if they have some material to work from. Hopefully there's stuff for you to enjoy!

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Just wanted to note I have another chain of chapters in the works. It's been slow going, though. I'll try to have them done by tomorrow night though. This one is following through with some fun changes for a few chapters, rather than just providing points for other people to continue from.

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5 (edited by Terranvoid 2015-03-30 13:08)

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Alright! I have finished! Two new branches starting here. I added over 30 chapters. Close to 35, I think.

Waiting for Brian's roommate starts towards a merger centric thread inspired by the Fiction Branches "Mikey at the Zoo" storyline, but stops at one merger at the zoo's entrance.

The other branch follows down a virtually finished storyline, with opportunity to keep going, ending with a very perverse furry night-club.

I hope you enjoy and most sincerely hope some of you might be inspired to continue some of these stories. ^.^

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Just another update on what I am doing. I've been puttering around with an addition I really want to have in the Allison thread. Not very many chapters. I need to get it done so I can add another set of branches. I'll be starting on that by tomorrow at the latest.

The Tranformation Guru has been adding some freaky, over the top, and wonderful things in a whole new branch, and Pillas, who I don't think has a Belial account, has been really driving the Allison storyline forward. Very happy to have them contributing.

Phil Ein Blank has been adding some story starts and I love where they could go.. Very nice ideas in there, although I'm going to be concentrating more on creating a few large branches of story before picking up other peoples threads. The Allison piece I'm adding was an Idea I just could let sit and wait, though.

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Thanks for the compliment.  I've busy with other things and haven't been able to add as much I'd have liked.
But hearing you like what I have done means I will definitely find the time to add more.

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Mhm. You do fun stuff, Phil. It's great to have you adding to the stories at all.

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There! Finished with my latest set of chapters and put them up on Writing.com.

http://www.writing.com/main/interact/it … 1223212113

This takes the current end of Allison playing with Mrs. Jackson, Katherine, and Amy in a different direction, snowballing her decisions until she winds up with someone propositioning her with a request to become her cock after school. I would love to keep going with it, but it would also be amazing to see someone else run with the idea I've written as well.

Instead of writing more down that path, I'm going to work on what I had originally planned to write. A whole new storyline to follow and add in another set of branches that will hopefully make writing for the IF more tempting for other people wandering across the story.

Anyways, I hope you enjoy my latest addition here.

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Alright. I think I need to make another public commitment to kick myself into gear again. I'll be trying to get my next branch finished to be put up on Saturday at the latest.

I also plan on editing the first post in here to mention the writers adding kinky and fun transformations to the story.

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11 (edited by Terranvoid 2015-04-12 13:29)

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There we are. It's technically Sunday, but here's new chapters. Not as fun as some of the others I think but here. A boy named Alexander gets the remote. Added over 35 chapters in this one.

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Been awhile, but I've finally done some basic work on this. Just catching the grammar and spelling errors I can find, likely not all of them, and adding the third choice to all the chapters. I added a few choice only chapters as well.

Hopefully I can get some focus for writing one new branch for this story. I love the work that other writers have added, so it's been a pretty good success in my book. Although there aren't too many contributing. Not surprising, given how strange things get in it.

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Strange can be good because it is much more interesting for the bizarre to be 'normal'. For me I do not even need to see an explanation of "how something strange became that way", I just enjoy seeing "how a strange thing is seen as normal". May I suggest taking some inspiration from this cyoc branch I started with a weird idea, and pillas filled out? Your writing is excellent too by the way.

http://www.cyoc.net/interactives/chapter_90064.html

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Is there any cockwoman in this series.

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I like "Seen as normal" largely because so much is set in a modern world. ^.^ Seeing no one freak out and the strange character getting taken down pretty damn quick for study is odd to me.

On writing.com, I offer more points than I've seen listed for most stories. Not that even that is worth too much, but still, it doesn't seem to be much of an incentive. I've been considering trying to come up with another IF to put up. I can have 5.

Thanks for the compliment on the writing. Always great to hear.

As to the CYOC thread? Fun. There's something similar in the Allison at School thread without the physical connection. I've found myself with plenty of things to do as well as writing. Productivity is a rare thing for me, so I'm trying to follow that along without terribly neglecting the writing.

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16 (edited by Terranvoid 2015-11-08 07:55)

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There! I finally added a new branch!

http://www.writing.com/main/interact/it … /map/11531

There's a few choices chapters that don't go anywhere, but it does follow down into some absurd sexual proportions and relationship changes that I quite enjoy. I'll add it into the proper forum later.

I'm done with this branch for now. There's a few short things I've wanted to add to some of the Allison branches for a bit. Hopefully I'll get to that next.

Edit: Oh, I just noticed. 7,000 views on it now. I have no idea how that compares to anything. Also, 244 chapters. Not bad for something as strange as Changing the World. Some things languish at 3~30 chapters. I've added in a lot of those chapters, but there's a nice amount of contributions from some talented authors. I find that pretty neat and amazing.

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I am glad to see you writing again, even if you did not expand on my personal favorite ideas. What you have done is very good.

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Compliments. Awesome.

Out of curiosity, what's your favorite storylines?

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19 (edited by worldendroar 2015-11-09 07:57)

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I enjoy the bizarre mergers at the zoo, and in general "unconventional" twists on the physical form. Be it a merger or transformation, sexual or curious, I enjoy strange and unnatural bodies accepted as 'normal, in society. A girl with hundreds of penis tentacles, a man with a full woman for a hand, a brutish monstrosity treated as another high school girl, a dragon whose womb is a house, a woman pregnant with hundreds, a girl with a giant bee stinger in her vagina, a centaur with a female upper body and male lower body. Things of that nature, regarded as ordinary and uninteresting by all but one person.

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Ahhh. Gotcha, gotcha. A lot of stuff in there I like. I've been considering something more sexually twisted for a story.

Shameless plug time, of course. Did ya ever play my text adventure? ^.^

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Yes. It was interesting.

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Sounds like it had some of what'cha like. I think that game turned out quite well. Small, but that was the idea for my first game.

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Hey there, everyone. I finally added some new chapters to my story here. I added a lot of branching choices, but there is some meat mixed in with them, both new major branches involving Allison, our horse-cocked shemale and Bryce, her balls. One before she gets to high-school and makes those delicious changes to herself, and one at high-school after them.

Allison changes herself in the school hallway. This is after she makes the school remotely feel her cock and changed a speaker into a massive living cock.

As well as the severely branching Allison isn't done changing her parents. The start of the sub-branches with some real content are at Allison accidentally drops the remote. The two available branches mirror each other until the end.
To get to the actual story chapters,  select: | Allison and Jane Merge Somehow. | Allison has merged herself into her mom. | That should get you past virtually all the branches that don't go anywhere, excepting a couple in longer story with Allison aware of her changes.

Hopefully things you enjoy! These branches are going to be eligible as options for the writing commission I'm planning on getting next month, in case anyone's considering taking me up on that offer.

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Those last few chapters were just great! Very sexy indeed.

Transformation Fanatic.

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Thanks. Glad to hear you liked it. Figured it was time to explore a body-part merger from the main characters perspective.

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I HAVE WRITTEN!

And probably edited poorly. The count of chapters added is kind of impressive, but I forked a decision down three copies of a cascade of choices, so a lot of that's the same thing repeated over. Fear not, for I did add a nice story chain in there as well.

Starting at Allison having turned back to normal after accidentally becoming her mothers balls: Allison merges her mother's cock with herself.

That follows along without any deep dead end branches until after Allison and her friend Stacey get to the food court at the mall. There's a brief Interlude followed by this merger.

After that, there should only be a couple of shallow dead ends to worry about. Hopefully you enjoy it! I was trying to get it done and on Writing.com before I get eaten by Xcom 2.

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You did well.

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Hey there! I'm a little late with this, but my IF story here has even more additions by Redstar 00. I would use Recent Additions to check them out right now, as they are mostly a few smaller branches.

However there's a nice little chain leading to a fun cow transformation in a Pet Shop thread. Could be fun.

I'll be looking for another commission next month as well! Redstar has down some awesome work, but I'm still looking to tap some other authors as well. If you know of a writer that takes commissions, feel free to mention them. If anyone is interested in the idea, but worried about their ability to deliver a commission in a timely manner, I'm willing to offer a get paid as you go arrangement to let someone test the waters. Something like $9 up front for three chapters and then probably a weekly payment based on chapters added. Too much piecemeal on payments might be a fair ding on transfer fee's.

I love getting additions to the story and so far the commission has been worthwhile to me, so I'll try my best to keep that going for a monthly addition of new content with at least a little depth to sink our teeth into.

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Hey everybody. Just wanted to say there may be good news for my writing output. I've been diagnosed with pretty disrupted sleep. They haven't said the words "Sleep Apnea" but I'm pretty sure that's what they're looking at. So basically I rarely actually get restful sleep. I've been tired for more years than I care to think about. If that gets taken care of, hopefully I'll have an easier time working on things like writing, maybe even get back to RP on F-List.

On another note, I'm curious if anyone can lend a small hand with my story here. One thing that seems popular enough is various anime settings for transformation porn. Ranma has been popular on the BEAddventure, Naruto and Sonic have plenty of IF's in Writing.com. There's a scattering of Mario stories too.

If anyone would be kind enough to add in branches leading to those in my story, I would certainly appreciate it. It might encourage some more authors to add to the story. I'm honestly at a bit of a loss for how to encourage more people to add to it. It's one reason I started paying for commissions. I figure the more activity I can encourage, the more activity might follow as a result of that.

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I'd be willing to add in an option chapter or two for sending the remote to new settings. Probably not too deep, maybe just some openings opening, but I'd certainly like to help.

Transformation Fanatic.