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I forget, does writing.com allow for reading all the entries that lead up to the one you selected, all on a single page?

Ohhh, yes please. I like your idea there. That sounds like it will be quite enjoyable to read.

Also, I like the thoughts on the remote. I don't mind people changing the functionality in some way, but I really do like it when they explain or say why it's different.

I was thinking she either breaks the undo button in a panic attack or the remote lacks an undo button due to a manufacturing error and she fails to realize.

Here's the concept I've just come up with:

Keira, a 23 year old girl stuck in a dead end job as a retailer at a department store. She hates her job, ignores her parents (who object to her bisexuality) and lives with an overzealous roommate with OCD who is very quick to criticize her for leaving the place unorganized. She gets home one day after a tiring day at work (and an argument with a particularly annoying co-worker) and discovers that her roommate is gone for two days and a box addressed to her is at her doorstep. Relieved that her roommate is gone, she opens the box and discovers the remote. From there on, things get weird.

Potential transformations include pussymouth, futanarism, dicknipples, multiple breasts, growth (height, dick growth), breast expansion and plenty more. Keira feels victimized at first but grows to enjoy her changes.

I'm going to start as soon as I can.

Certainly. I would love to see something like that. Not reversing it is a slight adjustment, but maybe she breaks the undo button somehow. Could be she somehow received a flawed remote as well.

If you didn't catch the latest branch I added, it might appeal a bit later on. Brian the bachelor gets the remote.

Choose Brian goes to experiment more in his room. and it goes down the road to a few changes like that.

Very intriguing. I see huge potential for a lot of interesting, wonderful and sexy transformations. Given the opportunity and time, I'd like to write a chapter or two, focusing on transformations that tend to include sexual body parts. I've got an early concept for a girl who accidentally gives herself a pussymouth using the remote and unable to reverse it, she begins doing a lot more with her anatomy, leading to some pretty strange and wonderful sexual experiences.

A few new thoughts on giving items strange properties. One could say copy sweating or lactation to an object. Then make it produce some other material that way. Of course, giving 2 gallon breasts the holding capacity of 5 gallon jugs without making them bigger. Maybe make Fire have the shape and durability of something like a comb. There's a lot of off-combinations to use on people and objects.

Very nice indeed. I am dearly hoping you finish that scene up. It's very compelling. You can break things up into two parts if you can figure out a good place to add some choices to it. If you feel like you left too much out of it, I can still edit the chapter and break up the original like I suggested.

Just added a chapter. I saw ordos transformation for the teacher on the Allison thread and I kind of wanted to explore her a bit. Kind of went a bit overboard though since i had to trim it down a bit to make it less than 10,000 characters.

Thanks

Yep, I do.I think you need one to own Interactive Fictions. If you look at the first chapter you wrote, I already added options. ^.^ Feel free to PM me, or even write them at the bottom of the chapter when you type it in. I'll edit out the chapter selection and put it into the actual choices.

Okay.  While the remote can't directly create or give objects transformative powers that don't already exist, it's reality altering function can  'Accidently' cause such items to exist after performing similar actions a couple of times.  I'll keep that in mind.

Another question, Do you have a paid for account there?
I only ask because I would like to include more options on some chapters without nesting repeated 'decision pages'.   If so, is it possible for you edit my additons to add the more options?  I could PM you here the specific chapter names and the option I would like to add.

Oh. It occurred to me there is a level of reality alteration that does let devices and methods of doing things come into existence. Such as where Allison is merging people and they think it's their choice to be that way. Initially, it might be an accident, or rare, or just something completely unexplained and accepted, but after a while, there would almost have to be some way to just make it happen in the new reality without the remote being involved.

So the remote can't directly point to a device or place and give it, "merging center"  or "merger lotion" qualities unless that kind of thing already exists to use as a template. However, after making enough mergers voluntary in the mind of the people involved, something like that would likely come into existence.

I'm working on expanding branches a bit before I really do too much. I'm also hoping to bait more writers into writing.