Hopefully you enjoy. Even had someone with a new account add a very respectable chapter.

Yes, please. That was fun and very much the kind of thing I like. Also well written. Hopefully you got my thank you and the points I sent along.

Also, I made a thread for this in the Writer's Corner. This forum tends to get the content of the story posted and I thought it best to split things up.

That, Joekilla, was amazing. I loved it.

Heya. I saw that opening chapter.

Hair-Growth scissors and the like isn't a part of the original intent. If you want one character to do it, the "Other character" in male or female being someone who could alter the remote would be good.

Otherwise, if you could take option 5 with " It could be something different altogether happens." and add a branch in there that gives the remote more powers. If you want to put your current chapter in there, I can delete where it is now.

The remote should be capable of that. I'm fine with it. I could use some clarification in the information at the start.

And if you like. You have some fun stuff, I won't mind you linking.

Actually, you need to subscribe to add an interactive fiction. If you don't subscribe, you'll need someone to host it. If you want to talk with me a bit, I have room for more.

The other is there for going outside the rules a bit. ^.^ And there's plenty of room for variations, so if you ever really get a bug for something creative on that front, just spell out what's different at the start of your story branch.

That demand message can be annoying.

Ahh, the rubber brush. That one didn't branch into as much fun and freaky stuff. A lot of sub/dom without a lot of creativity.

I love what the brush can get up to. That has certainly disappointed me with the updates for awhile. Heh. My remote is getting more bizarre forms than the rubber brush.

I'm working on expanding branches a bit before I really do too much. I'm also hoping to bait more writers into writing.

Okay.  While the remote can't directly create or give objects transformative powers that don't already exist, it's reality altering function can  'Accidently' cause such items to exist after performing similar actions a couple of times.  I'll keep that in mind.

Another question, Do you have a paid for account there?
I only ask because I would like to include more options on some chapters without nesting repeated 'decision pages'.   If so, is it possible for you edit my additons to add the more options?  I could PM you here the specific chapter names and the option I would like to add.

Thanks

Very nice indeed. I am dearly hoping you finish that scene up. It's very compelling. You can break things up into two parts if you can figure out a good place to add some choices to it. If you feel like you left too much out of it, I can still edit the chapter and break up the original like I suggested.

Very intriguing. I see huge potential for a lot of interesting, wonderful and sexy transformations. Given the opportunity and time, I'd like to write a chapter or two, focusing on transformations that tend to include sexual body parts. I've got an early concept for a girl who accidentally gives herself a pussymouth using the remote and unable to reverse it, she begins doing a lot more with her anatomy, leading to some pretty strange and wonderful sexual experiences.

I was thinking she either breaks the undo button in a panic attack or the remote lacks an undo button due to a manufacturing error and she fails to realize.

Here's the concept I've just come up with:

Keira, a 23 year old girl stuck in a dead end job as a retailer at a department store. She hates her job, ignores her parents (who object to her bisexuality) and lives with an overzealous roommate with OCD who is very quick to criticize her for leaving the place unorganized. She gets home one day after a tiring day at work (and an argument with a particularly annoying co-worker) and discovers that her roommate is gone for two days and a box addressed to her is at her doorstep. Relieved that her roommate is gone, she opens the box and discovers the remote. From there on, things get weird.

Potential transformations include pussymouth, futanarism, dicknipples, multiple breasts, growth (height, dick growth), breast expansion and plenty more. Keira feels victimized at first but grows to enjoy her changes.

I'm going to start as soon as I can.

I forget, does writing.com allow for reading all the entries that lead up to the one you selected, all on a single page?